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Today was my last day at the archives, which was kind of awesome, and kind of not. Awesome in that I finished my third box of political cartoons, bringing me up to a sum-total of 7 years and over 1800 unique cartoons; not in that there are still years and years of cartoons left I didn't even touch. Awesome in that my boss-person brought in cupcakes 'cause it was my last day; not in--well, you know the drill. Food allergies, which are irrelevant enough to library work that I hadn't mentioned 'em, but the thought was really nice.

On the writing front, it's possible that reading the last of Delany's About Writing while in novel-withdrawal mode wasn't the greatest plan ever planned. But I read the rest of it! Weirdly, he talked about Alphabetical Africa and then it came up in conversation with [livejournal.com profile] epicrauko this weekend/last week, and then a copy of it came across my desk at the bindery yesterday... so maybe I'll pick up a copy sometime, who knows.

Anyway, About Writing was good. Delany makes me think about writing in an orthogonal way to the way a lot of writers do. A few key things of his, so I remember them: each word building on an image--add things to the image, don't cut away what you've already caused the reader to picture; structures and patterns create plots; a story about a man going into a store and buying something can sideways-talk about []ism as easily as science fiction can (somehow I hadn't quite gotten that before, and I still don't quite believe that it's as easy, but maybe my brain just works in speculative fiction because I have read so much).

Yesterday--maybe the day before?--I sat down and thought, via a pen and notebook, about where I am in the novel-rewrite process. What's going on, and why, and why it matters to the plot and the themes and all those fun academic writer-y thinky thoughts. I didn't end up actually sitting down and working on it, since I didn't have a ton of free time by a computer that day and I want to at least skim through what I have so far before I go on, but...

...today I sat in the park after the archives, and the rewrite grew a title. So it is officially no longer Mad Library Hermits (which it was until I realized that that was problematic), and it is no longer Badass Library Hermits--both of which were joke-titles off a throw-away one-liner not even in this draft so far. Instead, it is A Returning Power.

Which might be a terrible title anyway, and will likely change, but it's actually about the novel, not my jokes about it. That's a step in the right direction. The fact that I know enough what the novel is about to make it grow titles is proof of a step, too.

Sometimes I feel like one day I will actually be a Real Writer. (The rest of the time is evenly split between "I'm a Real Writer already!" and "I will never be a Real Writer." In case you were wondering.)
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Second draft of Badass Library Hermits:
27.9 / 70


First draft of The Urban Fantasy Novel:
297 / 350


Not a super amount of progress on either one, but hey, a bit on each is all I ask. (And slush for Ideomancer, which is good because I had been feeling guilty about being behind on that batch and not doing it on my birthday.)

Last night we went to see A Streetcar Named Desire. Somehow, I had both a) not seen this before and b) not gotten spoilers for it. Though really it's the sort of thing where even if you technically knew the ending or had seen it before it'd still be a good watching experience, I was glad (and a bit amazed!) that I hadn't gotten spoiled.

It was at the Guthrie; my main reason to go was "I want to see something at the Guthrie while I'm in town!" The set lived up to their reputation (er, their reputation in my head)--it wasn't as flashy as some, but well-built and impressive nonetheless. The lighting probably was only noticeable because I am a techie (or possibly because I was sitting far enough to the side that I could see the scrim behind the set, which was lit a clear sky blue throughout--still not sure if that was on purpose or not).

Anyway, apart from techie details, it was a really nice production of a play which I now understand the 'classic' status of. It showed how complicated people are, and how we try to live with each other and with the systems of our society, and how many things have changed since the time period of the play and how very terribly many have stayed the same. This last is maybe best illustrated by the fact that the program had numbers for sexual-abuse and domestic-violence hotlines (though none for [spoiler]). And overall it was a well-constructed play, dense and intriguing.

If I hadn't wanted to just "go see a Guthrie play" it probably would've been a while longer before I saw it, so that all worked out very well.

(Spoilers could lurk in comments. Like I said, it's the sort of play where you might not care, but it'd be a different experience going in knowing.)

Tonight we have free Omnitheater tickets, courtesy of my library volunteering. Score!
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Revision-in-progress, new working title Badass Library Hermits (hey, I have to keep myself entertained somehow):
26.5 / 80

...which is the end of part two.

Obviously: I have decided not to stress about writing 5,000 words a day on this redraft. I never really made a coherent choice on whether I'm going to submit said draft or not, but I kept wavering so much on the decision that it seemed like a bad idea to stress myself out over it and stop myself from doing things like catching up on reading (for example, I got About Writing from the library last week, but haven't even opened it yet).

But, as obviously, I am still going to keep working on said re-draft. It makes a lot more sense and is way more coherent than the previous draft. And if I finish it a week or two after my birthday--well, I could send it in anyway and hope that they go "yeah, all right, it was mostly written when she was eighteen" or I could just keep revising/reconsidering it until I feel like it really is ready to be sent out/queried to agents. Either way, I'll be happier with the draft I end up with and also just happier in general with how stressed or tense my days have been recently.

(It is useful to know that I can still write 25k reasonably coherent words in a week. If I had an actual deadline, I could have kept going, I'm pretty certain. I also would've skipped library-work today, not stopped at a bookstore to read the rest of Will Grayson, Will Grayson (verdict: not quite as awesome as I was hoping from the beginning?)... but it just doesn't quite seem worth all of that as it is.)

At the same time, I do want to get back to working on The Urban Fantasy Novel, because I have gotten so close to the end of that. Which is another reason to slow down on this--I don't want to just skip off on something new and abandon that first draft.

I am happy with this decision. It is more sane, I think. Maybe I am missing a golden opportunity, but this is my life and I get to run it how I want to. So there?

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