Hooray! I think it is becoming yet more certain--I hope--but I would still be interested to see your thoughts on draft 2, because there are large chunks I haven't been changing at all.

Also, I can definitely send this one along when it's ready for people to look at. Sorry I didn't let you know I've been working on it past the draft I sent out, I keep sort of absently circling back around to this story and tweaking things.

(Ouch, down computers are no fun. Speaking of owing people things, I think I owe you a visit at some point? There appears to be a handy train. We should work that out sometime.)