See, I was just working on my much delayed comments on draft 2 and I was going to say among other things how much it had clarified and solidified between draft 1 and 2. In a good way, so that without becoming more didactic it had become more certain.

(Stupid main computer being crashed has meant that I spend almost no time online a week or on-computer even. For the last 2-3 months. I owe everyone communications of every type.)