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aamcnamara ([personal profile] aamcnamara) wrote2009-07-01 04:22 pm

backtracking

52284 / 80000


They are the wrong words. In fact, this is the wrong scene. It doesn't even belong in this novel.

I can tell because the architecture is wrong. So is the clothing.

Maybe I will try again later.

(The problem, of course, is that I don't know what the right scene is. Maybe I need another worldbuilding day.)